It would honestly be impossible to tell you my entire opinion on this movie, so i'll just keep it short and say that i love it to death. My only big issue with it is that the animation could have been a tiny bit more fluid; however, in the grand scheme of things, this didnt do too much to hurt the effect the film has.
Well the action was excellent once it got there. It felt like a classic DBZ episode, big explosions and everything.
Except one teensy-tiny thing...
Your grammar is severely lacking.
Just work on editing the dialogue and try and line up some voice actors for your next episode.
Otherwise, no other complaints! ^ -^
You know, ever though it is simple and without sound, it still bears a kind of anime charm, and the silence does not do it any discredit.
An innocent reminder of how all of the artists here got their starts :)
Great work ^_^
Great job, just like the first. But the characters looked really stupid lol.
To start, i liked the concept. I liked the art. I liked the effort. But i didnt like the stroyline, the length of the talking, and the fact that you tried to put a game that is way too huge and complicated on a site where most of the games r not final fantasy like games with a way overplayed introduction, and hairy controll scheme.
what i mean by that hairy controll scheme is that it was too hard to figure out what to do. that girl with the tiny breasts explains it to you kind of, but who really wants to listen to all that? i would just give some tooltips that pop up when you first go in, that better explain what you're supposed to do, and how to do it.
like i said, nice concept, but i needs a LOT of work.
desreves frnt pg i think!
i just think wee need 2 get moar games on the frnt pg tht r new ther r nomoar new wones out tere in like a full week!!!
lol, but ur game wuz rly good. like teh others said, though, u do need to make a difficulty setting to mak it moar challengin. other than that, good job!! keep it up!
***and PpPpPp.SsSsSs., dude, u rly need a preloader for it 2 mak it look nicer!!!***
I really liked it, nice work so far.
My advice would be as follows:
1) Come back on the reverb a bit. Its making my speakers pop a little, and while they arent the best speakers ever, they arent the worst.
2) play around with triplets and swing rhythm. You can do this easily by going into your piano roll, hitting the dropdown menu in the top right corner of the window, hovering over snap, and clicking either 1/3 beat or 1/6 beat. could help you figure out what to put in the middle there
3) Play around with dynamics a little. this is also accessible via piano roll.
This aside, like i said, i really liked it! there's work to be done, but its work that you certainly can do ^ u^
Good work, but its a little dark for my personal tastes - subjectivity aside, I think you should really mix it up a bit - throw some horns in to spice up those chords and establish a more complex groove.
Dont get me wrong, though - i like it! :)
I might just try that, I feel this song could of been improved and longer anyway, thanks!
There wasn't really anything wrong with it, it just feels a bit droll at the moment. I cant really pick out how to describe it to you, but... i dont think you really hit the "Euphoria," nail quite on the head. It's a solid track, dont get me wrong, but it feels slow, almost as if it wants to be chill but at the same time its trying to rock your metaphorical socks off.
Do send me a PM when its finished though, would you? Would love to hear the finished product! ^ -^
I will gladly send you a PM once it's completely finished! Thank you for the kind review.
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