Ok, seriously??
To start, i liked the concept. I liked the art. I liked the effort. But i didnt like the stroyline, the length of the talking, and the fact that you tried to put a game that is way too huge and complicated on a site where most of the games r not final fantasy like games with a way overplayed introduction, and hairy controll scheme.
what i mean by that hairy controll scheme is that it was too hard to figure out what to do. that girl with the tiny breasts explains it to you kind of, but who really wants to listen to all that? i would just give some tooltips that pop up when you first go in, that better explain what you're supposed to do, and how to do it.
like i said, nice concept, but i needs a LOT of work.