it was pretty good....
but i do have a few consrtuctive criticisms. first, id like to point out that the animation wasnt verry smooth, nor was the frame rate right. secondly, the voice acting needed to improve. the narrator didnt sound very entheused (probs spelled wrong). and lastly, the storyline wasnt very good. it was easy enough to follow, but just something about it made me uneasy.
other than that the movie was perfect, and seeing as i cant find any other submissions by you, i assume this is your first time. seeing this, im impressed. if not, then im still impressed, just slightly less than if it is your first submission. i feel like you have a great future in the portal here. keep it up and im sure you'll do fine :)